Comments on: Swamp Breakdown http://subrevolt.com/blog/swamp-breakdown/ You did this. Fri, 23 Jul 2010 16:59:30 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: eexlebots http://subrevolt.com/blog/swamp-breakdown/comment-page-1/#comment-3910 eexlebots Sat, 29 Dec 2007 01:07:58 +0000 http://subrevolt.com/blog/swamp-breakdown/#comment-3910 outline? story?! outline? story?!

]]> By: Jimmy Field http://subrevolt.com/blog/swamp-breakdown/comment-page-1/#comment-3907 Jimmy Field Fri, 28 Dec 2007 19:43:36 +0000 http://subrevolt.com/blog/swamp-breakdown/#comment-3907 This is a poor story. First of all... it lacks the three essentials of any memorable story: a beginning, a middle, and an end. Send me an outline of the story and I will tell you how to make it better. This is a poor story.

First of all… it lacks the three essentials of any memorable story:
a beginning, a middle, and an end.

Send me an outline of the story and I will tell you how to make it better.

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